Sunday, 11 November 2012

Essay feedback


Grade C
WWW- you have made some very good points here and pitched out relevant details/examples.

EBI- The way you have structured your answer doesn’t help you, and Q2 is a weakness. When you’re talking about representation you need to mention stereotypes and message the clip offers.

LR- Write a extra paragraph for Q2 referring to stereotypes.

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